| Original | Rewrite | Increase | 120% | Extra words | |||
| ch 01 | 2,417 | 2,998 | 24% | 2,900 | Required: | 25,000 | |
| ch 02 | 2,915 | 3,529 | 21% | 3,498 | Current: | 1,947 | |
| ch 03 | 3,334 | 4,086 | 23% | 4,001 | Target: | 23,053 | |
| ch 04 | 2,518 | 2,518 | 0% | 3,022 | Current day: | 9 | |
| ch 05 | 3,728 | 3,728 | 0% | 4,474 | Remaining days: | 21 | |
| ch 06 | 3,207 | 3,207 | 0% | 3,848 | Target rate: | 1,098 | |
| ch 07 | 2,893 | 2,893 | 0% | 3,472 | Current rate: | 216 | |
| ch 08 | 1,752 | 1,752 | 0% | 2,102 | |||
| ch 09 | 3,387 | 3,387 | 0% | 4,064 | |||
| ch 10 | 3,495 | 3,495 | 0% | 4,194 | |||
| ch 11 | 3,917 | 3,917 | 0% | 4,700 | |||
| ch 12 | 3,737 | 3,737 | 0% | 4,484 | |||
| ch 13 | 2,881 | 2,881 | 0% | 3,457 | |||
| ch 14 | 1,993 | 1,993 | 0% | 2,392 | |||
| ch 15 | 2,455 | 2,455 | 0% | 2,946 | |||
| ch 16 | 1,862 | 1,862 | 0% | 2,234 | |||
| ch 17 | 2,880 | 2,880 | 0% | 3,456 | |||
| ch 18 | 3,049 | 3,049 | 0% | 3,659 | |||
| Total | 52,420 | 54,367 | 4% | 62,904 |
Sunday, 9 November 2008
Less abruptness
Chapter three is the first proper chapter. The first two are more of a preamble. Three is where the structure begins. I've now rewritten it with less abruptness and it comes out to ... around 20% longer.
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