Chapter five rewritten

Did the farmers' market in record time, on account of getting a lift up there from my wife and hence arriving at opening time. Wrote before lunch. Wrote after lunch.

	Original	Rewrite	Increase	120%		Extra words
ch 01	2,417	2,998	24%	2,900		Required:	25,000
ch 02	2,915	3,529	21%	3,498		Current:	3,396
ch 03	3,334	4,086	23%	4,001		Target:	21,604
ch 04	2,518	3,114	24%	3,022		Current day:	15
ch 05	3,728	4,581	23%	4,474		Remaining days:	15
ch 06	3,207	3,207	0%	3,848		Target rate:	1,440
ch 07	2,893	2,893	0%	3,472		Current rate:	226
ch 08	1,752	1,752	0%	2,102
ch 09	3,387	3,387	0%	4,064
ch 10	3,495	3,495	0%	4,194
ch 11	3,917	3,917	0%	4,700
ch 12	3,737	3,737	0%	4,484
ch 13	2,881	2,881	0%	3,457
ch 14	1,993	1,993	0%	2,392
ch 15	2,455	2,455	0%	2,946
ch 16	1,862	1,862	0%	2,234
ch 17	2,880	2,880	0%	3,456
ch 18	3,049	3,049	0%	3,659
Total	52,420	55,816	6%	62,904