20% seems to be average

Chapter two is now rewritten. Again, it has come out to about 20% longer. Since I'm shooting for 50% longer, I have a significant shortfall. I'm not going to worry about that now. I have a few moves up my sleeve, as mentioned in the previous post.

Obligatory improved stat table:

	Original	Rewrite	Increase		Extra words
ch 01	2,417	2,998	24%		Required:	25,000
ch 02	2,915	3,529	21%		Current:	1,195
ch 03	3,334	3,334	0%		Target:	23,805
ch 04	2,518	2,518	0%		Current day:	9
ch 05	3,728	3,728	0%		Remaining days:	21
ch 06	3,207	3,207	0%		Target rate:	1,134
ch 07	2,893	2,893	0%		Current rate:	133
ch 08	1,752	1,752	0%
ch 09	3,387	3,387	0%
ch 10	3,495	3,495	0%
ch 11	3,917	3,917	0%
ch 12	3,737	3,737	0%
ch 13	2,881	2,881	0%
ch 14	1,993	1,993	0%
ch 15	2,455	2,455	0%
ch 16	1,862	1,862	0%
ch 17	2,880	2,880	0%
ch 18	3,049	3,049	0%
Total	52,420	53,615	2%